I can see the style you were going for but it just doesn't work. You are missing so many apostrophes, you have repeating words that should have been dealt with by your proof readers and it is overall sloppy work. Please, have your work proofread before you post anything more. Also, an anthalogy is a story that's parts aren't connected to each other with more then theme. Like Black Mirror or Outher Limits or Inside Number Nine. From what I know, these chapters will be connected, so you mislabeled there.

Yo, I just stumbled on Sunrising on NamiComi and man, I'm loving the vibe. The contrast of Sunny Duncan's optimistic "Ain't nothing a little sunlight can't fix!" attitude set against the gritty reality of a dangerous cartel like La Cima on the island of El Lugar is such a killer setup. It takes the classic superhero origin story and gives it this high stakes, sunny yet dangerous tropical flavor that you don't see too often. Honestly, the action potential here is insane, and seeing Sunny's light based powers clash with the dark, ruthless cartel members in a visual medium would be incredibly satisfying. I keep picturing how dynamic it would look to have bright, explosive sun drenched panels juxtaposed with the shadowy, tense mafia aesthetic of La Cima. Seeing her backed into a corner and unleashing her powers to fight her way out of trouble on those picturesque beaches has so much kinetic energy waiting to be drawn. I'm a commission based artist, and I'd love to help you bring some of these scenes to life, whether you need promotional manga pages, webtoon style panels, or character sheets to show off Sunny's powers. I love working with indie writers to capture their exact visual aesthetic. Let me know if you're open to chatting you can check out my portfolio, or ping me directly here, via email (artsbyava2@gmail.com), on Instagram (@arts_by_ava1), or Discord (avajames.art).

A good start, even with the minor grammatical errors. I'm interested to see where this goes, and particularly interested in how you handle the coming difficulties Sunny is likely to face.

wonderful to see the little Day Star begin to rise. looking forward to seeing more of whats to come for the little fledgling fighter. minor grammatical stuff didnt pull me from the story. practice makes better and you are on a good path <3