This is a neat concept so far. I like the idea of someone writing a bible like book for there universe god like being. Don’t think I’ve read something like this before. Also I love the illustrations and font being used, very inspired. I like the comedy so far. My only critic is that I wish the chapters were a bit longer. I prefer 3rd person perspectives but considering the context of this book 1st person was a good choice.

Yo, I just stumbled on Dream Goddess Chronicles on NamiComi and honestly, Coco Doe is such a trip. The whole premise of a "professional brat" reigning over a literal dream universe while some poor, biased teddy bear priest named Yu'Chri is stuck writing her bible is hilarious. It's got that perfect chaotic energy that stands out from the usual fantasy stuff, and the dynamic between them is incredibly fun. I keep thinking about how wild the contrast between Coco's waking reality and her dream goddess persona would look on a page. Specifically, a sequence showing her ruling her dream world with absolute chaos, juxtaposed with Yu'Chri desperately trying to translate her bratty antics into holy scripture, has so much visual potential. The comedy, the surreal dream creatures, and the clashing perspectives are practically begging for dynamic, expressive panels that really nail those comedic beats. I'm a commission based artist, and I'd love to help you bring some of these scenes to life as promotional manga pages, character concept art, or webtoon style panels. I work closely with writers to match their exact vibe, and I think we could make something really cool for your readers. Let me know if you're open to chatting you can check out my portfolio, or ping me directly here, via email (artsbyava2@gmail.com), on Instagram (@arts_by_ava1), or Discord (avajames.art).